Small announcement/Scrapping a character.

Hey there, this is just a small announcement. 

I've decided to scrap Lola and this is mostly because of my low writing abilities that I feel won't be able to do her justice. 

As I was trying to figure out how to rearrange her and Helga's event to fit in the new stuff, I noticed how weird and unnatural the dialogue between her and the MC was and knew that I couldn't continue writing her path. 

Quirky characters like Aki, Remilia, Kana and Adrianne are easy for an amateur like me to write but Lola is a special case. Realistically speaking, I don't think it would be possible to get her to have an intimate relationship with the mc as it feels like the closest they could ever get would be a brother sister type one and since this is a porn game, that would be a waste of time.

I'd rather not have to push the boundaries of suspension of belief to force them together and so I'll be dropping her from the game. I'll leave her older events in as a sort of remembrance but the new one I had made before my PC went on strike will be deleted and there will be no more events with her. 

I'm also having similar issues with Freya but I'm sure that I can manage with her.

TLDR: I've dropped Lola from the game because I can't write her properly without doing  poor storytelling acrobatics.

That's all for now, see you in the next one.